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The greatest thing you'll ever learn
Is just to love and be loved in return.
Poetry often talks about love,
But not the kind that comes from above.
Romance novels, candlelight and chocolate kisses
These ethreal scenes describe many teens' wishes.
Falling into love in beautiful places
Pearly smiles on both of their faces.
But soon the young lovers find that it's only infatuation
With pride and greed it's such a situation!
They claim to truly love one another
But love always does the what's best for the other.
Love is patient and love is kind
It takes two people to find
That love isn't something that comes from a store
Perhaps love means a little bit more.
Love is a treasure that isn't worth money.
Why people think so is a little bit funny.
True love can explain the deep bond between brothers
Or when a stranger voluntarily helps another.
Let's not forget the importance of unconditional love
Especially from God, coming from above.
The greatest thing you'll ever learn
Is to truly love and be loved in return.
©2006-2009 ~elhalfling
:iconelhalfling:

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This is a short poem I wrote when I was bored during one of my classes. Some of the parts of the poetry you'll probably recongnise because this poem contains well-known quotes woven in and around my own poetry.

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:iconclarinetist:
That's a beautiful poem, and so very true too.

I love it a lot! I favorite this! <3
:iconelhalfling:
Thanks! And thanks for the favourite, as well. :) Believe it or not, I wrote it when I was pretty bored in study hall and procrastinating on my chemistry homework. ;)

--
~The greatest thing you'll ever learn
Is just to love and be loved in return.

Think. It might help. Seriously.

Welcome to my world. Enjoy your stay.~
:iconclarinetist:
Oh waitwait, it is "love on another" or "love one another"? o.o ^^;
:iconelhalfling:
Oops! I was typing it out really fast, so I probably made a typo. Anyhow, it's all fixed now. Thanks. :)

--
~The greatest thing you'll ever learn
Is just to love and be loved in return.

Think. It might help. Seriously.

Welcome to my world. Enjoy your stay.~
:iconclarinetist:
Oh, okie. Hehe ^^; I make so many mistakes when I type fast, and then I re-read it a week later and I find mistakes everywhere.
You're welcome! :hug:
:iconelhalfling:
Thanks. :) It kind of reminds me of something we'd be reading in English class- all fluffy and *shudder*... lol.

--
~The greatest thing you'll ever learn
Is just to love and be loved in return.

Think. It might help. Seriously.

Welcome to my world. Enjoy your stay.~
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